Thursday, 13 March 2014
Bill Warrington's Last Chance by James King
Another book that begins in a car. What follows is the character sitting there, pondering his garage or maybe how to begin the story.
The fifth paragraph is one line:
Bill opened his eyes. He was wasting time, sitting there like that.
Hopefully, the story will begin now that character realizes he is supposed to be in a story and not just in his car. But then the plot slowly gravitates towards and falters in a kitchen drawer. If this moves any slower the pages will start to stick together.
First thing said: