Monday, 9 December 2013
The Honey Queen by Cathy Kelly
This sentences introduces a bag and some nostalgia, as we learn a page or two in that Sam is dead.
Frankie Green woke bathed in cold sweat.
So begins another book in bed; someone waking up in the middle of the night because she has issues. Another character enters the story sleeping which kind of shows what some people think of this opening. The character gets up, slips into the bathroom and becomes introspective - meaning we are introduced to the friendly back story dump.
First thing said:
"It's the history of our family, I should have taken this on years ago."
Can anyone say comma splice?